Archive for November, 2010

Why your emails should be bloody

I taught a blogging mini-course at the University of Wisconsin this month and one of the things I told the students was, “the more you bleed, the more they’ll read.”

An email list or blog becomes one-dimensional so quickly when there are no stories.

Here’s an example of someone who gets it right, in a niche you might not expect:

Cellist Zoe Keating has prospered online selling 35,000 of her self-produced albums through her website and iTunes.

She says telling stories and divulging personal information is a key to her success. ““They want to buy my records five times just to support me because of that.”

“It’s important for me to always be authentic. It’s me on those websites. If I were to use my Twitter account just to publicize things, it wouldn’t be authentic.”

By the way, she has 1.3 million followers on Twitter.  She didn’t build those followers by giving cello tips (unlike the many marketers who think they have to tweet endless marketing tips – ZZZZZ) but simply by being real. The world doesn’t need another tip, but it can always use another story.

So when you write an email or blog post, ask yourself if there’s a detail you could add to make it more real, more personal…more bloody, if you will.

As sportswriter Red Smith once said, “Writing is easy. You just sit down at the typewriter, open up a vein and bleed it out drop by drop.”

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Why a good ad is like a good sermon

“A good ad should be like a good sermon. It must not only comfort the afflicted, it must also afflict the comfortable.”

That quote is from Bernice Fitz-Gibbon, the most successful retail copywriter of all time, according to David Ogilvy.

Lots of ads and sermons do the very opposite…afflict the afflicted and comfort the comfortable.

For example, a weight loss or fitness ad that mostly communicates, “Look at me and all the weight I lost! Whee!” will just afflict the overweight people reading it and make them feel crappier about how they look.

Whereas a good email or piece of sales copy will communicate ”I’ve been where you are right now,” “It’s not your fault,” etc.

It will also make the fence-sitters feel less comfortable about their situation and give them a sense of urgency about taking action.

Just something to think about.

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